Find discomfort in the hem
of your occasion dress
zips on the side–
boys left behind
gawking at the sheer sight
of your lacy best.
Have you ever entered
a room filled,
familiar-faced
but not acquainted enough to
strike the ice?
All dressed up, nowhere to go
you arrive and yet
feel uninvited before
opening your lipstick mouth.
Surface-level small-talk: to
ask questions of others, to
keep conversation alive
I wonder if they sense my
mild polite engagement
as attention nonetheless.
My discomposure
a child nagging at my leg
pulling the sewn thread
and unravelling until I look
as naked as I feel.
You expressed the most intricate feelings weaved in your magical words. Loved it. Hope you are doing well. Wishing you a fabulous 2019
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Thank you, Shantanu! Hope you and yours have a healthy 2019 as well.
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Thanks a lot
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Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2.
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Beautifully expressed vulnerability…the anxiety and uncertainty that fills you in uncomfortable social situations!😊 ❤️
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Yes!! It seems like such a quiet thing that we all experience and yet never talk about. Thank you ❤
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You’re welcome! 🙂 ❤
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What can I say, beautiful?
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❤
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I really like this, the way you juxtaposition the physical with the emotional using symbolism. It’s also very sexy. I might title it “Wallflower,” and on that note–ask you if you would like to dance. Slow dance, that is, and smooth out some of those insecurities.
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That would be a great title! An internet dance sounds magical.
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Hi Elle, nice poem. It sure show how one feels uprooted in an unknown environment. I especially like the last stanza as if you conveying the emptiness and the stupidity of that situation you find yourself.
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Exactly! To feel like you have to say something simply for the sake of it is something I can’t bear to adhere to. Thank you!
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Sexy and profound.
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Thank you!
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You are masterful.
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You’re always too kind. Thank you.
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This is the life of an introvert, I get it ! 😔😔
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A tough one to deal with but so glad it came across, Jim!
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An amazing piece – so true to life!
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Thanks as always for coming to visit. 🙂
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😉
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“you arrive and yet
feel uninvited before
opening your lipstick mouth” OMG, hit that nail right on the head… amazing imagery.
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Thanks, friend! So glad to hear it also resonates with you–it really is a hard one to describe to someone who hasn’t experienced it.
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Lovely, candid, and raw. Thank-you for unravelling and showing your nude soul to us all.
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Thank you, Gabriel!
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beautiful as always elle, I am back up here with a new site name 🙂 but never could forget you! you flow through us like grace. a mere lady walking through a crowd but is still seen out of the rest. your passion will always make you the very best .. xoxo
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Wonderful to see you up and running! Thank you for your sweet comments. 🙂 xo
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😊😊very welcome!
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Wow. You just voiced that feeling to the bone and with such beauty. I know it front and back and in and out. This just gifted me greatly. It’s always wonderful to become be reminded that others feel exactly the same way. Makes life less lonely and me feel less odd. Thank You! 🤗💖☀️
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THANK YOU!! You always know just what to say. Thank you so much for always coming and giving me these uplifting comments. ❤ So thrilled to connect with you on this one.
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My pleasure! It was such a joy to Elle binge!!!
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Very Nice
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