Elle, It’s masterly. Short but so full of flavor. The poem tells more than it appears to tell at first glance. You have written another wonderful poem from the heart and mind. You, Elle, have become the candle and the master of the mantlepiece. It’s a beautiful inspirational poem. I love it, Stan
Lovely
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Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2 and commented:
I like wisdom in seventeen syllables.
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Inspiration!!
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Elle, It’s masterly. Short but so full of flavor. The poem tells more than it appears to tell at first glance. You have written another wonderful poem from the heart and mind. You, Elle, have become the candle and the master of the mantlepiece. It’s a beautiful inspirational poem. I love it, Stan
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Thank you, Stan! You’re always overflowing with kindness, and I appreciate it so much. Stay tuned tomorrow!
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Wonderfully written! Love it.
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Short and sweet, Elle, very nice π
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Beautiful words β€οΈ
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lovely job!
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Excellent haiku Elle. If permitted I shall add in two lines to form a renga:
ornamental catches eyes
overlook the warmth and light
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Ornamental is such a wonderful word. I’ll keep that in my pocket. Thank you for your addition!!
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Thank you Elle. I shall take your approval as permission to publish and share your poetry with readers in my blog. It will be fully acknowledged.
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Absolutely! Go for it. Send me a link to check out π
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The Chinese translation will be published later today or tomorrow.
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Thank you Elle for your approval.
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Beautifully succinct. Great imagery.
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You’re too kind! Thank you.
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Love this. Short and powerful.
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Thank you!!
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beautiful Haiku.
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Thanks Joey!
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YES!
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Lovely words Elle!
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Beautifully written
InHisCare πππ
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Thank you xoxox
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You are welcome!
Yonnieπππ
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Oh my god. This is awesome Elle.
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You’re too kind! Thank you x
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You are welcome.π
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Did you get to kiss that loveliest titan in a dream, coz baby you’re on Fire!
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Thank you!!!!xoxo
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I love this!!!! An Elle haiku! YAY! Cheers!!! π€β€οΈβοΈ
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I’m getting better at them!! lol. Thanks, gal xxx
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Simple and elegant!
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Wow! Simple advice but so strong! Thank you for this!
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