Addiction like
a familiar fiend
staring down the bottom
of a porcelain bowl
I forfeited what I believed
I didn’t deserve.
Finding my old self there
the one who spiralled to this moment
a girl who used to believe
that size zero had gravitas to it
I felt comfort in the past
of reminding myself of who I used to be
and all I still have left
to become.
Progress is progress is progress
and relapse is not an eclipse
just a moment within this large expanse
of forgiving oneself
for turning out the light
before it got dark.
A paper boat may not sail the seven seas
and may not get to
the finish line first
but she is still a boat
and she is still
getting somewhere
Oh to spend an hour in your heart and mind, you are deeper than deep and wiser than the prophets when it comes to human nature. It is hard to imagine you having any weakness or struggles. But it comes back to self love, I think , which is the hardest love of all. How can it be when so many others love us, we can’t see our beautiful worth to the world. And knowing you, if you collected all the love everyone has for you, you would need galaxies just to store it in. I love this piece, and I love you . So there!
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You are so kind with your galaxies comment! You have always been around for me–I value it so much. Thank you for always thinking so kindly of me!!
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Very beautiful! “A paper boat may not sail the seven seas..” I adore this!
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I agree with “short-prose-fiction” the reference to the paper boat is wonderful.
Thanks
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Brilliant!
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You really are a wonder. The best thing to happen to Sunday since sleeping in was legalized (Kennedy administration).
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Haha you are too funny. Thank you for always stopping by.
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Again you’ve created a blazingly beautiful poem. This poem dips deeply into the addiction of being addicted and how those that are can get through it and even when they think that all is lost, they are “like a paper boat that is still going somewhere” You have an amazing ability to write poems that convey a story that comes from deep inside your heart. I love this poem. It’s a winner, like you. Stan
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Thank you, Stan. It was a tough one to put into words, but I’m so happy it translated well for you. Thank you for always coming by!
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Amazing. I can’t stop reading it over and over again.
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Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2 and commented:
These lines are excellent:
a girl who used to believe
that size zero had gravitas to it
I really, really also like the conclusion.
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Nicely said! Loved the ending!
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It read to me the spiral and shame of overcoming an eating disorder, but trying to find one’s way out through the reminder that no one is perfect and just because you took a step backward doesn’t mean you’ll lose the battle.
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Yes, thank you for your interpretation–you’re right! Even though we hit some lows, we’ve made it this far, and we’re still going. Thank you!
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Yes definitely, you’re welcome!
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as one struggling with an eating disorder myself, i found this immensely encouraging. your determination to battle leads me to do the same, and i thank you from the bottom of my heart for the beauty, both in and of your words xx
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Oh my sweet friend, thank you for sharing that with me. You’ll always have support, and we will always share our story together. 🙂
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Even a little paper boat, if it has a battleship spirit can not only get somewhere,
It can get to wherever you want to go. Nice poem.
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I love that, ‘battleship spirit’! Thank you for your kind words.
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Love the irony of size zero having gravitas to it.
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Beautifully worded, Elle. The battle within self to push the self beyond and then give it a hand of love..to cross seas of patterns and pain.
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Wow, that’s wrote beautifully. Last paragraph is my favorite!
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You’re too kind!
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Brilliant work elle
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Elle, as always, beautiful with a touch of bitter sweet and a tender ending. Such a pleasure to read!
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Love this Elle, really good job. x
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Keep this comment private if you want, but I’m curious if you meant “familiar friend” or “familiar fiend” (but I like EITHER/BOTH of those!)
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Haha thanks for pointing it out! It’s definitely a play on ‘familiar friend’ but it’s really a frequent enemy, so fiend is right. I do appreciate the keen eye though–I have fallen prey in the past to a poor typo! 😛 Thanks Jack.
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This actually gave me some comfort in dealing with my own issues. Sometimes it seems I’m not moving fast enough but progress is progress a theme which you so wonderfully expressed
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I appreciate so much that you took the time to comment. Thank you for sharing–it’s always nice to hear someone else understand.
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Such a beautiful similarity in regards to recovery! I can totally relate!
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Thanks, pal!
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when one gives up before they know the outcome. Again I think I have you pegged just a bit. 🙂 see what I MEAN? as you scroll through all I write in response to your writing. I have been away on a break for a little while but will ALWAYS, ALWAYS come to see you because you have become someone I actually speak about even now. I was just telling my son and daughter about you this weekend, all great things of course but it’s just in life you meet people sometimes through deeper aspects than in physical form that leave a mark in your life! that was you for me. stay great my friend. love shonie!!!
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Omg Shonie these comments are killing me!! The world around you doesn’t know what a gem you are. Thank you so much for your kindness!!!
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And now you just made your comment kill me xoxo that was truly truly kind of you to say. It made my whole year!! Thank you so much ❤❤❤
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