6AM, fragile morning air
whispers of fall.
orange hue, honey’s dew
my lungs breathe in
the crack of crème brûlée
nestled in the back of my throat
sweet, burnt
sun, rising
the cafe ’round the corner
he’s smiling at her
behind the counter
he imagines tucking her wisps
behind her ears, she
pours frothed milk
white ribbons
holding back a yawn
“Keep the change,”
“see you at lunch,”
the softest exchange
familiar faces for another time
When the sun has woken up too,
he’s mustered the strength
to ask if he can
see her again
in the evening.
Luscious verse.
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Outstanding
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Love it. The poem portrays morning perfectly. Stan
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Sweet,but then that’s why they invented Starbucks isn’t it? 🙂
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Oh I remembered my teen days. Beautiful.
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I love the naturalness of the story. It displays a rich vocabulary but at the same time one can imagine the average person describing the scene with the same words.
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Look, if you keep this up, I’m at risk of becoming an ardent fan.
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Reblogged this on Poems (poesie).
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Nice one
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A beautiful and sweet exchange! Lovely indeed Elle! 🙂 💕
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Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2.
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Perfect!
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Lovely
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This didn’t do much for me. I read it twice; I read it this morning, and re-read it just now. I liked the rhyming it had, I dind’t like the phonetic sounding of the ending, and I’m not typically a fan of love poems, as far as how they are executed the majority of the time.
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This is simple yet beautiful, Elle; I can almost see the scene unfolding in my mind 🙂
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Sweet ! Were you people watching again?? 🤗🤗
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I’m hoping this is the real thing these two … what a charming tale of autumnal romance
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Awww. Romance in the air! This was so sweet. Cheers!!! 🙂
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Beautifully captured 🙂
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Woah!
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So sweet! I loved it x
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Beautiful vignette. Your poetry gives me life as much as it distills it!
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I really like this in its purest simplicity! I hope you write a book of poems one day!
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I’ve certainly considered it! Maybe one day. 🙂 Thank you so much for your kindness.
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The imagery in this is so good!!
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thank you!! ❤
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